Agree with all drunkencynic's notes.
If you're going to run
Brutal Hordechief, might make sense to include some stuff with Deathtouch. Attacking with
Brutal Hordechief and
Ruthless Ripper would effectively wipe their board. Tossing in a
fleshbag marauder with the bloodstained champs will allow you to make them sacrifice one of their creatures while bringing your champ back at the end of turn. Stuff like that.
30 creatures is a lot. You're sacrificing a lot of possibilities on the Spells end. And aside from the Whip of Eberos, I don't think the spells are very thoughtfully chosen to address potential threats. And even the Whip isn't as great in your deck because you don't have any stompy creatures to bring back and really pack a punch.
What drunkencynic said about card interactions is important because it points to this: the creature choices seem random/like they don't work with one another in any particular way. Aside from the Warrior theme, just seems like a bunch of "good black cards."