I play mill every friday at my local store, last day i went with my esper mill (WUB), so I like to see decks like mine. I don't know if u usually play mill but there are little improvements you can make:
1- See mill as exactly as burn. Burn decks like naya only use direct damage on face so I recommend focusing on dealing mill and not on control.
2- I would not recomend lands that enter tapped and transforms into creatures because you lose one mana per turn.
3- No need to one target removal so here are a little improvements
Dismember and
Damnation -> Supreme veredict (can't be countered) //
Cryptic command,
Mana leak,
spell snare ->
Mind funeral,
Hedron Crab