For a deck so filled with CC1 and CC2 I think you can go down to 20 land instead of 23. 12 creatures and 3
Myth Realized leaves you far too vulnerable to removal for my taste. I would bump up that creature count and take out some spells.
Monastery Mentor would be great if he is in your budget and so would
Abbot of Keral Keep. The Titanic Growths and
Stasis Snares seem like the best spells to lose.