Thanks for the two replies I got in reviewing my deck. I knew it was going to be the wrong type of Aggro deck when I posted it but I wanted to have a base to start with; like I said, I am very new to Magic this year, have looked at it long time ago but was playing other games, Warhammer, Flames of War, etc.
I wanted to put more duplicates of the Creature Cards; especially to make it more of a powerful Aggro deck but I did not have any at the time, but I have them now and adding them all the time, so I will reapply my deck with duplicate Creature Cards and then you guys and gals can make another review of my idea, just keep in mind, I am very new to the game, have not played many pick-up games and have not been to any tournaments, but was at Comic Con Magic in San Diego this year, cool.
Thanks again guys and gals.