Really nice work, but you can improve the primer, these are few tips:
There are way more creature lands than 10.
Guildless Commons is a bounce land.
on fetches (or another tab) you should also include fable passage, prismatic, expanse, wild, etc.
you totally missed the ramp land tap with krosan,
myriad landscape, and also
ancient tomb, temple of ancient gods, etc.(even if they are not dual)