Sorry it took so long to get to this. I missed it the first time it was posted.
You'll first want to go back and proofread this primer. There are a lot of sentences where there are words missing and I'm not sure what you were trying to say.
With your single card discussion it's good that you went over the rulings and corner cases with these cards, but I'd also like to know why you're using these cards. There are a lot of cards that can be used in Kaalia, so what made you want to use these cards? You'll also want to go over a few of the cards you didn't include, and why you didn't use them. I would like to know why you aren't using
Smothering Tithe,
Teferi's Protection,
Flawless Maneuver, and all the cards in your maybeboard.