There is qiute som stuff in it that works a bit, well not good together but hey try makening it and add new cards too it alon the way this way your deck becomens really good and you find out of what you like playing best. So did I start with a red and green deck quite like this in zendikar, and ended up with a strong green and a strong red deck afterwards + many red & green deck that i builded along the way on abilitys and flavours I like and one had in my deck. BTW my strongest deck is my green Path of Nature deck the first deck i ever build with was green & red.
So what I'm trying to say is build it modify it after some games when u find better/funner cards and have fun playing your one deck