I saw the deck and it looks like it could be something lethal with the current build. Considering that the Khans block will be falling out of standard soon (if you care about that sort of thing), then it does look like a workable deck. I do have a few concerns though;
1) There isn't too much tapping of their creatures that I see. Maybe if you added more
claustrophobia and creatures who also have that ability then the deck will be true to its theme.
2) Nearly half of the deck is
pure mana. I'm sure that U/B decks do need quite a bit to get things kicked off right but you might want to cut back on some of the land and try to use that space for more creatures and or spells.
3) The vampire motif could work well in this deck and if you did decide to make this deck standard you could use some of the vampires from the new Shadows over Innistrad block and the Full Battle for Zendikar set. This way your deck would be more streamlined and you'd be able to create more synergistic plays with your deck.
4) The death touch is a good element to this deck but you may want to try incorporating creatures and spells that let your creatures
deal damage first or deal their power to another creature. For example, if you equipped
pathway arrows to any of your creatures that has death touch then you could literally snipe away at their larger creatures and not even worry about heavy blockers or tricks during combat.
So far what do you think about my suggestions?