Hi there.
first of all, i'm not a experimented MTG player, i've been playing since last year, so keep that in mind before you consider what i'm going to say.
I posted a very similar deck some days ago, i brought that deck into a FNM and the main issue of my version (
http://deck.tk/4EqA7Eus) was that the mechanic was terribly slow for working and very, VERY mana hungry, but, beside that, some things were really interesting to consider, like:
- You ALWAYS want Stichwing Skaab on your graveyard. 3-1 flying creature for 2 mana was OK, but bringing Amalgam back every single time was interesting.
-
Nagging Thoughts and
Sinister Concoction was a fine way to put zombies (Specially Amalgam and Stichwing Skaab) on my graveyard in my early stage. You don't want them on your hand forever and wait for Liliana's +2 was terribly slow. (Nagging with Liliana +2 was interesting also)
- The early i got
Forgotten Creation on play, the better
Diregraf Colossus became.
- In my online version i don't have her, but on FNM i tried
Sidisi, Undead Vizier over
Geralf's Masterpiece and she was just awesome against something really strong and frequent on my local meta and so hard to manage to my UB before her:
Reality Smasher. And against RG Ramp, Vizier stops WorldBreaker,
Reality Smasher and let you find on time your
Infinite Obliteration for Ulamog.
- Nantuko and
Relentless Dead worked awesome on my opponent's final step, by sacrificing Relentless on Nantuko's ability and returning him to my hand and any zombie to my battlefield with Amalgams together. (I played FNM with 2 nantuko and 2
Forgotten Creation).
I win just 1 game, Draw 1 and lose 2 (1-2 on the score), and the main thing to improve to the next FNM is to fill my graveyard quickly, and for that, i will try Sultai (i know you don't want to go 3 colors, but this changes seems to improve my main detected
weakness, maybe they will make sense to you too), with this modifications:
- 4
Gather the pack over 4
Nagging thoughts. (i've been testing this and it rocks. Best scenarios are
Diregraf Colossus 4/4 or 5/5 on turn 3 or Stichwing Skaab + 1 or 2 amalgams on battlefield on turn 3)
- 2
Forgotten Creation away for 2
Mindwrack Demon (yeah, is not a zombie, but helps you to fill your graveyard and is a real threat on your battlefield, mainly because it survives
languish, kills Gideon, survives first Avacyn and with the new strategy,
delirium is easy to get)
- I'll use 3 Lilianas instead of 4, and i will go with 1 Kiora. She does exactly what you need on this strategy and she is even able to untap your Stitchwings returned from your graveyard and make them cost only 1 mana.
- Take away
Risen executioner and go with full playset of Stichwing Skaab.
- 2
Nantuko Husk over 2
Forgotten Creation.
- 2 Main
Languish, or 1 main and 2 sideboard. (It seems it hurts you a lot, but the fact is that you have a really nice comeback strategy, and i wasn't able to fill my battlefield better than humans or CoCo's decks. I brought 1 on my SB on FNM and cleaning the field was easier to
recover for my than my opponents).
- Take
Sinister Concoction away and add a third
Grasp of Darkness and 1
Evolutionary Leap (
relentless dead with this? Yes, please!).
I'll post my new version soon, maybe it will help you and naturally, any advice would be nice in return
See you.