I havent considered Pyrrhic Victory or
Cauldron Haze; those could be fun ways to make crazy large amounts of negative counters in my deck. Thanks for the
inspiration.
Here is the advice part: you will need better creatures. Unless you hit the right lands and the right cards, you will have to stall for time to draw -
scarscale ritual is great, IF you have a creature to put the counter on. Otherwise, it sits in your hand. I know, I tried it. Your wincon is still a million tokens, but a few beefier creatures, or scary deathtouch/wither/infect will either keep you
alive against faster decks hitting you, or make it unprofitable to attack you. Don't rely on having tokens is my best advice.
Also, why do you have the fetchland for
forest/
mountain in there? I didn't see any red mana costs but I looked somewhat quickly. There's at least one new land that sacs itself for making negative counter.