The
perpetual timepiece in my opinion needs to go because it does not push towards the purpose of the deck and it would throw away your vital cards without you knowing. If anything
contingency plan would be a better spell if your're going towards delirium because you can actually choose what hits the grave.
Nissa should come out and the
ancient crab because while they are "good cards" there are better ways that you can push this deck forward. For example, if you add
scrounging bandar than you've got a low drop creature that will give you +1/+1 counters. Also
lifecrafter's gift then you can get the +1/+1 counters across the board without having to rely on your flying pirate.
If anything for this deck I would recommend
BANT (W/G/U) over SULTAI (B/G/U) in this deck because the +1/+1 generation is something you'd see in a deck where field presence and a strong creature line up is important. Black does not care about strengthening its armies and does not hesitate to sacrifice. White preserves and strengthens everyone so all your warriors survive the battles to come. If you do go triple color then that's what you'd want to do.
Also if you decide to add red as a third color and make this deck TEMUR (G/U/R) then you can incorporate the energy mechanic in this deck and incorporate
scrounging bandar with
fabrication module. You will have SOOO many +1/+1 counters and you can place them on the bandar every turn because every turn
scrounging bandar gives a +1/+1 counter to another creature. This will keep him
alive and every turn someone is getting stronger.