I see a lot of decent pieces in the deck. But it is all random pieces with no cohesiveness.
As a note, I tend to follow the '10x4' rule when making casual decks. (I call it 01x4 atleast. Maybe it's just 'Rule of Four' in some places)
10 individual cards at 4 copies each = 40 cards
20 Lands
This gives a good foundation to a deck. Once you play with it and find out what cards you don't like drawing all the time,then I change it. Pull out some copies of cards, add some other choices, see how fun those are when played. And slowly evolve a deck from there!
I've also got a casual white deck, although mine is very different from yours. Mine is based off of the Kor creatures of Zendikar, with an equipment theme. It's decently strong but all the cards are related to a theme, which is why there are no 4-ofs. And it sits at ~$20
https://deckstats.net/decks/99624/1072552-kor-equipments