White Border Xira v2 (EDH / Commander)

On S7:E26? of MTGGoldfish's Commander Clash, Seth and Tomer both played White Border Jund. I thought the concept was fun, and so I've tried to crib from actual Magic players to build my own. I really like Xira Arien, so that's my commander. From there, I used Tomer's deckbuilding guidelines as well as as many generally good cards from Seth and Tomer's deck to cobble this thing together. The only rule I think I broke is that it's a little light on card draw (8 cards, or 11 if you count the cycling lands), but that's made up for by having a card-drawing commander.

In addition to white-border-ness, the finished paper version of this bad boy will also have a bunch of cards illustrated by DiTerlizzi, Rebecca Guay, and Phil Foglio. Also there are a bunch of cards with real-world quotes on them, so that's cool too. My only regrets are missing out on that sweet Quinton Hoover Karplusan Yeti, and the fact that Abyssal Horror (illustrated by rk post) is so awful. I mean, Dakmor Lancer's no prize, but at least it's got a body better than a Zombie token.

What would you change? Add or subtract? Blood Moon? Elvish Piper? Hell's Caretaker? Rolling Earthquake (or any of the goofy legends) from Portal Three Kingdoms? A copy of Nezumi Graverobber from the Hachette UK cards?