You're welcome.
I've just seen the revisions, I think you're on the right track.
Btw, don't be afraid of having some more basic lands in your deck. on the first look they may seem bad, because they don't have anything special. But keep 2 things in mind:
1. some advantages on other lands come at a price (moneywise, disatvantages like enter tapped, etc).
2. there are cards that explicit hate non-baiscs (
Blood Moon,
Back to Basics, etc.)
Even if your playgroup hasn't entered a region, where the second Point becomes important, it's always useful to keep this in mind.
If you need more help with the deck, some feedback about your problems with it and your playgroup would be nice. For example, if you face alot of combo decks, we could think about some more removal to work against them.