[EDH / Commander] Rhys the redeemed

[USNThompson]

Rhys the redeemed

first deck I have made I don't know how it is but I'm open to feedback

[Marshstepper78]

Your land count is too low for a CMC over 3; I would bump it up to 35-36 and then see if you can cut one or two (depending on mana dorks and mana rocks). This seems to be a common problem with new deckbuilders.

Admittedly, I haven't looked too closely at your creatures, but a cursory glance reveals a lot of creatures that don't have real token synergies.

Tolsimir's token is legendary so "populating" it is a bit useless.

Phyrexian Rebirth is a better board wipe than Fated Retribution in this case. It'll leave you, in all likelihood, with a massive token you can replicate later.

Have a look at the Rhys the Redeemed EDHREC page to see what kind of creatures work best in this kind of token generation deck.

[Slyvester12]

This looks more like an elf deck than a token deck. You want more synergistic effects focused on your theme. I'll link a few similar decks of mine and you can see if they fit what you're trying to do.

https://deckstats.net/decks/132279/1308904-rhys-and-the-boys/en
https://deckstats.net/decks/132279/1357281-radha-elfball/en
https://deckstats.net/decks/132279/1340793-ezuri-elfball/en